Our new literacy topic is ‘Stories with mythical creatures or events’. This week we have been learning the story of Brave Rowland. For your homework this week, write the first two chapters of the story. Use the story map as a reminder!
Remember to include:
- Capital letters and full stops
- Fronted adverbials
- Speech
- description
Error uploading picture of story map I think - will look on Monday! Sorry everyone!
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once upon a time there was a sister called lady Ellen there are also three brothers.One day Brave Rowland (one of the brothers ) kicked a golden ball over the church roof, they sent lady Ellen to get it but she doesn't return.Then the oldest brother sets of to save lady Ellen. He rides off to ask the chief Warlock for how to get to Elfland ( Elfland is the place lady Ellen got taken to by the Elf king ) . When the oldest brother doesn't return the second oldest brother rides off to the chief Warlocks house. The chief warlock gives the same advice he did to his older brother and of he set. Then the other son doesn't come back.
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Now the queen waits with her youngest son. After many days passed he asked if he could also search for lady Ellen.The Queen then grudgingly gave permission. The youngest son Brave Rowland set off to ask the chief Warlock how to get to Elfland. The Chief warlock said there are 2 things you must do.One you have to do one you can't. The one you have to do is if you talk to anyone you must chop there head off.The thing you can't do is eat anything however hungry you are .
By Elliot
Once upon a time there was a Queen who live in an enormous palace. The Queen had a beautiful daughter and three very brave sons. One day the three sons and their sister (the daughter) were playing football. During the game the youngest son Brave Rowland threw the ball so high that it flew over the tall church roof like a shooting star. The sister Lady Ellen went to get it the three brothers waited and waited but Lady Ellen didn't return so the three brothers went home.The oldest brother asked the queen if he coud go look for Lady Ellen the queen gave permition o the older brother set of to the chief Warlocks house. Back at home the queen and the two sons waited for the oldest son to return but he didn't come back so the second oldest son asked if he could look for Lady Ellen. The queen said yes so he too set of to the chief warlocks house just as his brother had done but the other son didn't come back.
ReplyDeleteOnce again the queen waited with her youngest son for the princes to return after many days Brave Rowland kneeled down before the queen if he too could search for Lady Ellen. The queen closed her eyes wearly as she did not want him to leave but grudgingly she gave permition. The queen brought a gleeming sword with a jewel encrusted handle "take this my son" she said "it is your fathers sword that never struck in vain" she tied the sword belt around Brave Rowland he hugged his mother then set of to the chief warlocks house as Brave Rowland rode on into the forest with the tall trees towering above him.Brave Rowland grabbed hold of his sword tightly as he approached a giant hut in the middle of the forest. He causiosly knocked on the the door "once again we come to you" he said "tell me how I may rescue the fair Lady Ellen the chief warlock tought him as he had tought his brothers."my son there are two things you must do one is something you must do and one is something you must not do the thing you must do is who ever talkes to you must take your sword and chop their head of the thing you must not do is however hungry or thirsty you are you must not eat anything or you will never see your home again.
Once upon a time there was a Queen, one daughter called Lady Ellen and three sons. They lived in a enchanted castle surrounded by magical rainbows. One day the oldest brother ( Omar ) threw a golden ball over the church roof they sent Lady Ellen to go and get the ball but she did not return. Then Omar set off to go and rescue Lady Ellen. He rides off to ask the chief Warlock for direction to Elfland ( Elfland is the place where the Elf king took Lady Ellen. When Omar doesn't return the second oldest brother, Charlie, rode off towards chief Warlocks house. The chief gives Charlie the same advice that was given to Brave Rowland. The other son ( Charlie) doesn't return.
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The Queen waited with her youngest son for the princes to return. After many days passed he asked if he too could search for Lady Ellen. At first the Queen did not approve but grudgingly she gave permission. Then the youngest son, Brave Rowland set off to ask the chief Warlock how to get to Elfland. The chief Warlock said "that there are two things that he must do. One of things you must do and the other you must not do. The one thing that must be done, is that if anyone talks to you their head must be chopped of and the second one is something you must not do. No matter how hungry or thirsty you are you must not eat or drink in Elfland or you'll never see your home again.
Brave Rowland
ReplyDeleteLong ago there lived a graceful queen. She had three courageous sons and one delightful daughter. One luminous evening the four children were playing with their blazing golden ball. It was Brave Rowland the youngest sons turn to throw. When he got the ball he throwed it so high it soared through the air over the church widdowshins. Lady Ellen wen to fetch the glistening ball shining so hard you could see it from a mile away.
The brothers waited for many hours but their sister did not return. The princes got worried and told their mother. Their mother said one of you will need to go to the chief warlock. He lives in the forest in a small den. The oldest brother said he would go. After countless days the oldest brother did still not return. Then the second biggest son asked the queen. The son set off following in the footsteps of his brother. Even he did not return.
Alas Brave Roland could not wait any longer. He pleadingly asked the queen to let him go and search for Lady Ellen. The queen sleepily closed her eyes but grudgingly said yes. Just before he went on his white horse, which was as white as snow. She got out a sharp sword in a silver casing with a ruby red jewel encrusted on the handle.
Then he set of on his audacious investigation. Into the forest he went, tightly gripping his sword anxiously. The forest was very peaceful, serene and tranquil forest was also surrounded by towering trees and rushing waterfalls.
Hidden in one of the waterfalls was a small hut. Brave Rowland rode into the waterfall quickly. He knocked on the fragile door. Knock knock knock. An elderly man opened the dusty door.
He said, “I have been expecting you, you must be here to ask me where your sister is. “
Brave Rowland asked, ”I am how do you know where she is? “
The man said, ” I know lots of things even why the earth is round.”
Then Brave Rowland said, “ Then where is Lady Ellen?”
The man said, “ She is in elf land captured by the elf king to defeat him you will need lots of training “
Then the old man opened the door to his den and started to train him just like he had trained his brothers. Once Brave Rowland had finished his training the old man told him there are two things you must do in elf land. One is something you must do and the other is something you must not. The thing you must do is anyone who you speak to before saving Lady Ellen must have his or her head chopped of. The thing you must not do is not eat or drink any water however thirsty or hungry you might be or you will never see your castle again.
By Shriya
WOW THAT IS VERY LONG
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Once upon a time there was a queen who had three sons and one daughter.One day they were playing cricket but brave Rowland sent the ball so high it went over the church roof.Lady Ellen went to get it but she didn't return after to sons went to find Lady Ellen but then they didn't return either.After many days brave Rowland begged to find lady Ellen but the queen said no because he was her only son left but after she said yes.The queen gave him his fathers sword which never struck in vane.Brave Rowland set off to chief Warlock when he reached there chief Warlock said do this and don't he said if any one talks to you get your sword and cut off there head don't eat or drink or you will never see your home again.
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ReplyDeleteLong ago there were three sons and one daughter born to a queen. One day they were out playing with there're golden bowl. They really liked playing the game. Suddenly the youngest son brave Roland threw the bowl over the castle. Their daughter ( Lady Ellen ) went to fetch it. For a while she did not come ,so the eldest prince went to the chief Warlock to ask what has happened to their sister.When he got there he asked and the Warlock replied your sister has gone around the castle 'whideshins' which means (opposite side of the sun) the warlock sent him to save her but did not come back. The second son set to find his sister and brother.
Once again the Queen waited with her youngest son for the princes to return but they did not. Brave Roland begged the Queen to go. Finaly the Queen gave permission and then went somewhere. In a few minutes she came with a sword. Dear this is your father's sword which never struck in vain. He set of to the chiefs cottage tall trees towered him as he went. Then he reached a cottage in the middle of the forest.
Once but only once again we come to you. Please tell me how to save my sister and
brothers. Warlock taught like he had taught his brothers and finally said my dear boy their is one thing you should and one you shouldn't. If anyone talks to you in elf land
just chop their heads of and don't eat any food in elf land or you will never see your home again.
By Senuda