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Two characters from Brave Roland
ReplyDeleteMy characters are Brave Roland and the chief Warlock because they are both good and are both smart at fighting.
Brave Roland was walking to warlocks cottage. When he knocked on the door, the warlock told him to come in. ''Sorry to bother you but, I have to save my brothers and sister'' said, Brave Roland.
''I quite understand'', said the chief Warlock.
Brave Roland started to feel cold as they went into the training room. It had a machine with boxing gloves on. To him it seemed like a machine that you were supposed to duck with ( to bend down) and stop it from hitting you and he was correct.
''Now lets duck to miss the punch '', said the chief Warlock
As Brave Roland ducked the punching gloves, the Warlock shouted
''Brilliant, Excellent, fabulous.''
After that the next task was to hit the sword on a carpet to get use to using the sword.
The final task was to jump over stones. ''Right'' ,said the warlock. Their is one thing you must do and one thing you should do '' the thing you must do is chop anyone's head of and the one you shoulder is to not eat food or you will never see home again'' Said the warlock
by Senuda
Brave Rowland (chapter 2)
ReplyDeleteBack at the castle, Brave Rowland (the youngest son) was waiting with his mother, the Queen. The two brothers and Lady Ellen went missing for days on end.
"Mother"Brave Rowland asked,"can I go and rescue Lady Ellen as well?"
"Dearie me,son it is dangerous out there and can you see what has happened to your brothers! You are my last hope! But,as a queen, I shall let you go".She handed him a gleaming silver sword. "Rowland, take this with you. It was your father's sword. Here, save your family." The queen then buckled the sword belt around her son's waist and said a spell that would give the sword victory. "Now go" she said, gesturing him outside and heading back to the throne. And with that, Brave Rowland set off.
Brave Rowland[chapter 4]
ReplyDeleteThe nefarious elf king bravely said " You think you can defeat me. "
Then Brave Rowland said " Yes I do " he courageously continued " The only way we can settle this is to have a duel. "
" Ha I can beat you anytime. " said the giant sized elf.
" Prove it " said Heroic Rowland
The elf king and Fearless Rowland fought for many hours until Brave Rowland won.
By Shriya
My two characters are Brave Rowland and the chief warlock because they are both really strong and mighty.
ReplyDeleteBrave Rowland was walking to the chief warlocks den and asked and knocked on the door. The warlock told him to come in. "Sorry to disturb you but can you please train me to fight so I can save my sister from the evil elf." "l will train you but you will have to do me a favour." "I will do anything just name it and I will get it done." " Oh it's all right I was just testing you." "So what should I do first." "First I want you to practice your kicking and your punching. Practice right here with me and when it is time for you to leave I will give you the equipment you need to practice at home. Two years later Brave Rowland had been very strong and was ready to fight the evil elf.
Brave Rowland said ''can i go and rescue lady Ellen and my brothers'' the queen said ''
ReplyDeletei will not let you go '' but sadly let him go
By Hannah
MRS Messa maybe the king elf and brave roalnd might be a good one
ReplyDeleteBy nimla
Brave rolnd and the elf king
ReplyDeleteBy Nimla
'Free my brothers and sisters' shouted Rolnd or else.
'Never' said the elf king
'Oh yeah' said Rolnd
'Then challenge you to a fight' said brave rolnd
Brave Roland took out his sword and began to fight.
'You better surroner ' shouted the elf king
'Never' brave rolnd said
Brave Rolnd defeated the Elf King