This
week, write a recount about your favourite holiday or trip.
Where did you go?
What did you do?
Why is it your favourite?
Remember
to:
- - Include an introduction including: Who? What? Where? When? Why?How?
- - Use interesting detail to hook the reader.
- - Write in the first person ‘I’.
- - Include description of what you did and saw.
You could plan is using the planning skeleton for a recount to plan it!
My favourite trip i went to is Turkey. We took the plane and when we landed we went on this bus with people inside. The diver was bringing us to are hotel. When me and my parent got to are hotel we had are dinner. The next morning we went to the cafe and choose what we want to eat.After I went in the swimming pool well the hole holiday I was in the swimming pool so nothing really exciting but I loved it but I made friends and sat next to him the way back home and had a great sleep
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My favorite trip has been my trip to disney land.I got to meet princess Arora.My brother was speechless when he saw Mickey Mouse.But the best part was swimming. The swimming pool had a giant twisty slide that stuck out. For breakfast we got a wide range of cereal and a variety of different french foods. We had a lovely hotel room.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite holiday was when Turkey and Isle of wight.Turkey was realy fun,but i think isle of wight was a tiny bit better.To get there we had to drive a really long way to were we get on the ferry.On the ferry me and my best friend went all the way to the far end too see the water.While the ferry was driving at the far end we could feel little sploshes of water go on our face if we lean only a little bit.it was also really cool inside.
ReplyDeletesoon the ferry stopped and we were at isle of wight.we soon saw a taxi that was waiting for us,so we all ran as fast as we can to it.the driver soon dropped us of Instead of a Hotel we were living in a Caravan.The next morning we went to explore because there were so many cool thing .We bought food from hounslow to eat here.
The next day we went to the beach it was really fun and warm,until we did sea swimming.The water was freezing cold and salty.I was standing in the sea talking to my friend when i figured out i should'nt have because a wave splashed me with cold and salty water.On wednesday we did swimming luckily it was'nt on the beach.There was a really cool slide outside ,but it was closed because it was cold.
The next day it was hot so the slide was finally open(YEAH).there was a long line ,but i did'nt care.On the second last day we had ahuge barbacue.
Finally my holiday was over so quickly(NO).We came back to Hounslow and had a good night sleep.
From Abhinav
My favourite holiday was to France. First we had to go to Portsmouth for the ferry to calais. When we got on board we went to see our cabin it was tiny. Outside it was freezing cold I saw some navy ships at the dock.At last we got their it was very epic in the ferry though.
ReplyDeleteThen we went to the house that we were staying at it was gigantic. There was a swimming pool some tall trees and fluffy bushes.The first thing we did was play table tennis in the game room. After we explored a bit it was the biggest house ever. I was staying with my friends Jack,Daniel and George.
The next day we had a swim in the pool and a race. Jack won I was second George and Daniel came joint 3rd.Later that day we had a hunt in the jungly area i got stung by some stinging nettles. On the final day we played a bit of football then I went to Bourdeux with George.
We met some english people they were rather good at football. We mainly played football. I went swimming a bit and cycled everywhere.Then we went to a water theme park it was good until my sister was sick.
then we went to the beach the next day. It had amazing waves to surf on. When we got out it was freezing.On the last day we had a experiment we put sand in a weird thing then stepped on it . It blew everywhere. Sadly we had to go back to England. On the ferry back we pasted the Isle of Wright. Then we got home.
The End By Elliot
Last year I went to Spain with my family. We went there by car. First we went to Barcelona. We stayed there in a hotel for 3 days , we went to different places like city canter , Magic Fountain and other places.After that we went to Valencia.It is a beautiful
ReplyDeletecity.My favorite places was the beach we spent the whole day there. I made a friend he could speak little English. We made sand castles.
From Valencia we went to Benidorm, another city in Spain.we went a big theme park there. i had lots of fun of rides there.
From Spain we came Paris and stayed for two days there. Those were my best holidays.
From Sannan
During our summer holidays we went to North Wales. We travelled by car and had to leave very early in the morning.
ReplyDeleteIt was the longest journey that I ever had been on even though I took my books, colouring pencils with me but I was too excited and kept asking are we there yet every few minutes . Tanraj and I saw beautiful hill sides and animals as we went pass them.
Finally we arrived to our apartment all exhausted and just wanted to crash out.
The next morning after breakfast I and mum went to the pool slide it was amazing loads of little activities to do. Dad and Tanraj went to the mini golf club and after lunch we all chilled out at the local park had ice creams and doughnuts. During our stay we met so many lovely people and had fun playing with their children's.
Our excitement had to come to a halt because it was time to go home, but I loved every moment of my holiday it gave us time to spend as a family.
By jasleen!!!
During the summer holiday I went to the beach. With my family it was amazing. First I woke up and had breakfast.next I got my new swim suit.And we set of in my dads car.
ReplyDeleteWhen we were half way there my sister threw up on me.I stunk like a skuk.I had to get changed.
My favourite holiday was going to Ibiza. We stayed there for 2 weeks. We first went to Stansted airport as Heathrow was too expensive and there was no need for paying that much money. The flight was 5 minutes late but it didn’t matter as we had to check in and were there in the nick of time. We boarded on a little jet sized plane I am not sure what the name was but I think it was easy jet. The trip was for only 2-3 hours (I could watch a full movie in that much time) and it wasn’t very exhausting. When we got there we went to our hotel which had 10 swimming pools. I hadn’t made a friend yet as there weren’t many children I could make friends with. When we went to sleep it was so nice as the mattress was changed.
ReplyDeleteThe next day went to rent a car for the rest of our vacation. It was a Peagout. We drove around the premises and saw if there were any shops. We found Aldi and shopped in there luckily they take British pounds also. When we came back we went to another shop which takes any currency and gives you euros. We then went to the games there which cost 1 euro I played table hockey with my dad we tied 15 -15 and I was so close losing 14-15 but I scored in the final 5 seconds and I was relieved. We slept in the hotel room waiting for our final day when it came we went to the ferry for Spain and we went Barcelona and we stayed there for 2 hours and now it w2as time to go we returned the car and came back to London.
By, Zunaid