This week we have started learning about discussion texts and have been
reading an example text entitled ‘Should Daleks be allowed to live on Earth?’
This week we would like you to rewrite the
text using the story map. You can try to copy the text exactly from memory or
add in your own arguments and ideas.
Try to include:
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Full sentences with capital letters and full
stops.
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Generalisers eg. some, most, all, many
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Connectives eg. therefore, moreover, also
since the arrival of the Dalek's on this planet, there has been much discussion about whether or not they should be allowed to live on earth.
ReplyDeleteThe doctor has argued about if the Dalek's can ever be turned from bad to good. There are several reasons. first we have no pretention there are alien ships and they are destroying the earth. Furthermore the Dalek's are stronger then us. Moreover the doctor argued that there computer technology is greater than earth considerably.
On the other hand, there is many more humans than Derek's. First of all the Darlek's previously experimented live on earth. Additionally the Daleks have no compassion and only aggression.
Having considered the options we believe the Daleks to be a great risk to earth. Jasleen
Should Daleks Be Allowed To Live On Earth?
ReplyDeleteSince the arrival of the Daleks on this planet there has been much discussion about whether or not they should be allowed to live on earth.
The doctor has argued that the Daleks could be tamed for the force of good.There are several reason why they could be beneficial. First of all, the Daleks would be ideal defenders in an intergalactic battle. Furthermore, they are tireless workers. Moreover, there skill in technology would help the earth considerably.
On the other hand, a large majority of people do not believe Daleks should live on earth. First of all, they point to the fact that when the Daleks have previously visited they have tried to exterminate all other life forms. Additionally, the Daleks have no compassion and feel only hate.
Having considered the argument from both sides, we believe that the Daleks should not be allowed to live on earth as the risk is to great.
By Shriya
Since the arrival of the Daleks on this planet there has been much discussion about whether or not they should be allowed to live on earth.
ReplyDeleteThe doctor has argued that the Daleks could be tamed for the force of good. There are several reasons why they could be beneficial. First of all, the Daleks would be ideal defenders in an intergalactic battle. Furthermore, they are tireless workers. Moreover, there skill in technology would help the earth considerably.
On the other hand, a large majority of people do not believe Daleks should live on earth. First of all, they point to the fact that when the Daleks have previously visited they have tried to exterminate all other life forms. Additionally, the Daleks have no compassion and feel only hate.
Having considered the argument from both sides, we believe that the Daleks should not be allowed to live on earth as the risk is too great.
By, Zunaid