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A description of his physical appearance and
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Full sentences.
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Interesting sentence starters.
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Adjectives to describe.
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Odin is a god a Viking god. Odin made a city for the Giants the Humans and the Gods. First he made a city for his enemies the Giants and he called it Jotunheim home of the Giants. Then he made a city for the Humans and he called it Middgared home of the Humans. Odin also made a city for him and the gods and he called it Asgared home of them Gods. Finally Odin joined Asgared to Middgarerd with a beautiful, fantastic rainbow. Odin the Viking god had only one eye because he sacrificed his eye. Odin was tall, he had a black eye, had a blue hat A long brown beard he wore a long gown and he cares a long and wonky brown stick around with him for EMERGANCYS!!!!!!!!!. Odin's personality was calm and trustable and kind but he hats people and he gets very angry with them if they disrespect him or disobey Odin's orders. Your sincerely Jasleen Kaur Saund Hyde park class.
ReplyDeleteOdin is the first god the first Viking God. Odin first made a land for the Giants it was called jotunheim it's freezing I bet you have to where five shirts and a jacket.Next Odin made a place u for us humans called miidarerd it's awesome there with cool animals fresh watch and very sunny there. Then Odin made a land for the gods with rainbow bridge. Odin is tall with a green hat and scarf around his wast he wares a pachet on his left eye.
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