Imagine you are the size of
Traction Man and are exploring our school garden. Write from the point of view
of the character using the first person (I). What does it look, feel and smell
like?
Include lots of adjectives and try
to add similes and metaphors. Remember to think, say, write and check!
I can hear the tree,leaves rustling.
ReplyDeleteThe dark colours of the leaves made it look scary as crocodile munching leaves.
I could feel the howling wind blowing in my face.
I could smell the watery leaves it smell's as peculiar as wet grass.
I feel like I am surrounded by beautiful smells which smell like perfumes my mum.Everything looks visible,colourfull and pretty.I am scared of colossal bees,because they look as horrible birds.In the other side of the garden it was stinking disgusting and I had to run away.
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I can see the different coloured leaves falling from the trees. I can hear the wind howling like it's saying hello, the birds singing divine songs,the children chattering, aeroplanes moving and cars beeping their noisy horns. I can see the trees they are so big I feel so tiny just like an ant about to be squished on, the flowers are very beautiful and they smell amazing! I can feel the leaves touching my head and the soft green grass touching my knees. The tiny insects are very nice and cute well some of them are. I never want to leave. From Shriya
ReplyDeleteThere are massive fox holes everywhere . The long grass is up to my face. There is a huge building plants in.The birds are pretty and colourful.
ReplyDeleteElliot
I can see the tall sunflowers rising on top of me, small insects lark on the ground that look very spooky but on top of me frightening bees buzz around like jets. I can hear the soft noise of the wind, the tree leaves rustling, the cars beeping and air planes flying across the air. I can smell the bad smell of carbon, the sweet smell of the wind and another smell of perfume that I can smell more than anything else. I can taste the
ReplyDeletewind blowing fast into my mouth every time I open it.
So I was thinking this was such a good place and a very beautiful place to explore but oh no I can hear buzzing on top of me I did not look up because I knew it was a bee sow I ran very fast away from their.
By Senuda
I feel the wind blowing swiftly.
ReplyDeletei smell the roses smelling like pie
and the flowers are colored in yellow
As i walk into the school garden it was like walking through narnia. It felt like i was walking through narnia. It felt like i was in a whole new world. There was pretty, colourful flowers and long green trees which were full of delicious and juicy fruits. As i walk along the ripe vegetable beds i smelt freshness in the wind that was gushing by. As i came to the end of the graden i was greeted by this amazing giant sunflower. Then the childern came out for thier break and one girl almost trode on me. By then i knew it was my time to go.
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Traction Man In Year 4 Garden
ReplyDeleteAs Traction Man(who is the size of a small doll) in the Year 4 garden when I took my first step it felt like I was in a deep, damp jungle full of huge giant trees and different horrible nasty beasts. As I entered the garden I decided to wear my jet-pack and protection suit which was green as the jungle trees so that I could camouflage myself. I was dying to look at the different flowers and smell them. Along with me I carried a book about different types of plants and animals. So that when I came across something strange, I could look it up in the book.
Then on the journey I saw talking trees that were throwing their evil black leaves at me. I was very excited to explore but when I saw a giant woodlouse I knew that it was a stinky insect and stayed away. When I had explored the whole garden I took photos in my brain and saved it in my memory. When I got back home I shared my adventurous jungle experience and with all my friends.
By Aaratrika
I had just arrived in a vegetable patch as big as my house wearing my ultra-safe leaf suit and matching shoes.
ReplyDeleteI could smell flowers, herbs and vegetables all mixed together to make a weird smell,a little horrid a little nice.
There were all types of veggies that were able to see and able to smell, such as a beetroot and a pumpkin.Although the pumkin was a pumkin, from a distance it was an orange ball.
I heard birds tweeting a tinkly tune that was not really heard by the noise of planes zooming overhead.
As well as vegetables I could see giant leaves towering above me,blocking the sun. Far ahead of me were mouth-watering tomatos, and upon the branches of the beanstalk were juicy, red cherries.
I felt nervous and excited both at the same time to explore.
I can see the enormous flowers.I can see fox holes.I can also see the big wavy leaves.I can hear the birds tweeting.I can feel the giant trees as big as an aeroplane.I can also feel the tall grass.I can smell the smoke from people having barbaque. A almost trod on me.
ReplyDeleteI was a size of a mouse walking through the sweet smell of wet grass from the morning dew which was towering above me.
ReplyDeleteAn exotic aroma of roses and lillies,pine cones and evergreens.
I can hear the birds tweeting in the beautiful blue sky and i can hear the trees and their leaves rustling in the wind.
But what do I hear now? A slurping noise coming closer and closer and there from between the blades of grass I see a giant snail the size of an elephant coming towards me. It moves really slowly leaving a long silvery trail behind it.
It just slips past me and crawls under a giant stone size of a hill.
Jasleen
I felt excited and serious about which way to go N NE S SE SW W NW E NE.
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