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| Avenue of Trees |
This beautiful
picture is of part of Hyde Park during the autumn.
How would you
describe it to someone who you were talking to on the telephone?
They cannot see it, so your description needs to be vivid!
Please put your entry up by Wednesday 27th November
You may write your blog response on paper and bring it into school by the same date if you prefer.
Mrs Messa
A bright gold tree with millions of leaves. It has a beautiful, brown bark which leads up to the best bit.The bright sun which shines down and makes everything look amazing.
ReplyDeleteThe golden colour in the sun is most striking, isn't it.
Deletenice job Jack
ReplyDeleteHow would you describe the picture?
DeleteThe avenue has brightly-coloured trees and leaves. It's looks like a palace made of gold jewellery! When the sunlight shines down, it would look stupendously fabulous! It would be like heaven! ( Furthermore, the season looks like Autumn)
ReplyDeleteWhen the fallen leaves covers the ground, it looks like a royal carpet cut into half. The trees are standing like scarescrows reaching their leaves.The road looks narrow and rocky. Moreover, the tall brown trees are in a vertical straight line.
Feeling the wind flow in the breeze makes me shiver. The sounds heard in Hyde Park are absolutely melodious! The smell of the air is fresh and nice.
Some effective similes Ashwyn - a palace made of gold jewellery really helps me picture it in my mind.
DeleteA buiteful hall way of trees.A good path of trees.And a nice sun set.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of this being like a hallway, Tarek. Where could a golden hallway lead to?
DeleteI am in front of a charming, attractive and exquiste scenery. This scene is all of the above descriptions that I have mentioned, plus loads more because it is autumn. You should see how motley,pleasing and delightful it is.
ReplyDeleteThe leaves are as blazing and as colourful as the sun. If you are there then you would be able to see the passage way which is like an altar at a wedding.
You’d feel so mellow,leisurley,glad and blissful if you were in this location. I feel so overjoyed, because it is so peacful.
Well,bye for now. I’m looking forward to seeing you later.
I agree, it is peaceful-looking. The colours are blazing and golden - do you think it's a warm place to be?
DeleteI think it is a warm place because it has lots of warm colours in the picture. The golden sun shining through the leaves reminds me of a summers day.
DeleteSofia I think that your blog homework is pretty impressing and you have described stuff about the leafs and the autumn whether. So on that remark well done.By jasleen
DeleteHyde Park is lovely and colourful in autumn,so it is a beautiful sight.There is a cluster of huge leaves under every tree.The leaves look golden because the enormous warm sun is shining down on them.I walked along the lengthy,leafy path.When I shuffled along I heard the rustling of leaves under my feet.The path seemed to go on for ever.
ReplyDeleteA never-ending avenue of bright golden trees. Their branches join over the road, leaves forming a bright golden cloud. Huge trees look like solders standing guard.
ReplyDeleteThe scene reminds me of when my mum took me to a park in Reading. The only thing missing is me running in the leaves.[LOL]
WOW!! It's amazing.I am walking through the leaves in Hyde Park.This pathway has got lots of leaves ground it has dozens of trees and leaves.It is really sunny the branches are brown like a hedgehog.The leaves are red and golden.The trees are so close together.It looks like it is close to each other like a bush.
ReplyDeleteI am walking down a rocky Golden isle.The chilly breeze smells like fresh alcholine water from Leshouches in the alps; I walk over the crispy golden yellow and fiery reddy orange leaves sprinkled over the floor like:sprinkles on a cake;The Beauiful ebony brown bark is as dry as a towel which has not been used ever.The trees with semi-full leaves on it seem to untangel as I walk down the neverending magical pathway.The mezmorising green fields surrounding the marvelous passageway leading to glory and untold riches have a golden mellow sheen to it as the ultra-violetly bright sun illuminates the magnificent fields.miniscure patches of yellow baby grass surround the the trees like kittens surunding their cat mum.I can here small animals scurrying,leaping and slithering to their homes in fright of the terrifying sight of a human.It is an equisitily colourful scenery!
ReplyDeleteIt was looking like a field of glory.There are big trees with green leaves.When the season autumn starts the green leaves start turning into orange,brown leaves fall down it covers the path.When the leaves fall it is a beautiful scenery it was awesome.This is the avenue of trees in Hyde park.
ReplyDeleteIt looked like a field with yellowish,golden grass.It was very Autumy day.It is looking like the most colourful thing I had ever seen.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like a golden palace of gold . The hallway looks like pathway to the thrown. The leaves on the floor are like millions of gold petals are thrown ( the thrown like threw or throwing) at the king.
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